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Customer Feedback: One thing good about Top Admit is their charge is affordable. But more than this, after the first revision, I could ask them to help me check my essay again for further questions. My editor (the Professor from University of Pennsylvania) emphasized that he revised my essay in the way the committee members would think that I was diligent enough to be a qualified applicant as they would expect. My editor also gave me lots of useful suggestions. I was wondering whether the modifications made my sentences less vivid. He clarified that he revised my essay as a non-native speakers. The editors from Top Admit improve customers’ essays based on their own styles instead of playing wording games. Top Admit gave me a very different perspective from my original ideas about how to write a good essay. Now I understand that an excellent essay doesn’t need to be exaggerative at all. I gained admission to my favorite school. My academic advisor even said that I’m a very promising student. I bet his compliment and the grant of assistantship from school must attributed to the brilliant SOP revised by Top Admit’s editor! I really want to recommend Top Admit to all the students who want to study abroad!

  • Customer: Ms. L
  • Was admitted to: Doctoral of Musical Arts at the University of Wisconsin-Madison
  • Service Used: SOP/PS/Essay Editing
  • School: University of Wisconsin-Madison
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Customer Feedback: The reason why I chose Top Admit is because of their strong editorial group and their reasonable price. While doing the edit, I was impressed by their super efficiency. In addition, the consultant restructured and changed my long sentences, which made my essay more readable. Meanwhile, the consultant also used the admissions committee's perspective to point out my weakness and suggested changes. This one time free follow-up indeed largely improved my essay. Thanks for Top Admit’s help !!

  • Customer: Mr. L
  • Was admitted to: M.S. in Finance program at University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign
  • Service Used: SOP/PS/Essay Editing
  • School: Computer Science & Engineering department
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Customer Feedback: Very Efficient! They are capable of expressing what customers really want to say!! Thanks for Top Admit’s help!

  • Customer: Mr. C
  • Was admitted to: M.S. in Computer Science program at Columbia University
  • Service Used: SOP/PS/Essay Editing
  • School: Taiwan Top University in computer science major
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Customer Feedback: The editor respected my original thoughts and structure. He helped me polish my content and reword my phrases in a more Americanized manner. My essays became more complete and integrated. Although there weren’t too many modifications, the revision turned out to be helpful! Thank you, Top Admit! Even though I didn’t like all of the first revision, I liked the editor’s comments a lot. I spent one month rewriting my essay. At the same time, I wrote to Top Admit and asked them to give me more time to communicate/ discuss my ideas with my editor. They were totally ok with my request. After I sent them my rewritten essay, the content was revised slightly to make it smoother. I could see how much effort the editor put into my essay. I was very satisfied with the outcome, and I got into all the schools where I applied!! Thank you!!

  • Customer: Ms. H
  • Was admitted to: M.S. in Applied Linguistics and Second Language Acquisition at Oxford University in UK
  • Service Used: SOP/PS/Essay Editing
  • School: English education major
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Customer Feedback: Very detailed edit. Acceptable price. I also got admission from Boston University & Penn State University.

  • Customer: Ms. C
  • Was admitted to: Master of Law program at Washington University in St. Louis
  • Service Used: SOP/PS/Essay Editing
  • School: Master in Law
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